Alright, I'll be honest with you: For the BG, you could have got away with it with no stair case in the back. And the thing with the legs is that the right one is longer then the left one (even if there's a bit of forshortening in the left one, you can still see it.)
But it's not really the legs that bugs me. It's the hands. Just a little advice: even though a hand can bend like your right one, ask yourself if (in a natural way) you would hang on to a pole this way^^
Other than that, I think it's a pretty cute design^^
(Please tell me if you don't want those kind of critiques from then on ;3)
Yay! You posted it! My dreams have come true. ALL OF THEM.
LuckyCypher makes an excellent point. Just keep practicing your profile views & anatomy, ja? But lovey coloring and details in this one. I can see your inprovement with backgrounds. Nice work there. And those bricks. Those bricks are just secksy. :U yessssssu
Lucky is right o.o Those legs and hands, you can improve it o/ But i loved the painting and background For the hands, wen i draw them, sometimes i use my own as model XD Try it! o/
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Alright, I'll be honest with you: For the BG, you could have got away with it with no stair case in the back. And the thing with the legs is that the right one is longer then the left one (even if there's a bit of forshortening in the left one, you can still see it.)
But it's not really the legs that bugs me. It's the hands. Just a little advice: even though a hand can bend like your right one, ask yourself if (in a natural way) you would hang on to a pole this way^^
Other than that, I think it's a pretty cute design^^
(Please tell me if you don't want those kind of critiques from then on ;3)
Seriously, cool picture. : P
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My dreams have come true.
ALL OF THEM.
LuckyCypher makes an excellent point. Just keep practicing your profile views & anatomy, ja? But lovey coloring and details in this one. I can see your inprovement with backgrounds. Nice work there.
And those bricks. Those bricks are just secksy. :U yessssssu
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For the hands, wen i draw them, sometimes i use my own as model XD Try it! o/
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"We just fear what we can't kill...!" Reyka, hunter
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Its all in the eyes
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Its all in the eyes
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Its all in the eyes
And I don't mind that kind of critique. I like anykind; they always help so thanks again!
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Its all in the eyes
Anyway, remember the pics I sent you? I uploaded them with some neat effects. : P
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